Excellent Examples of Informative Writing
The Thought Process of Building a Castle, by Maggie [Notice Maggie's excellent word choice and use of relevant vocabulary, including terms like "strategic", "quarry", "vulnerable" and "resources" ] There is so much thought process that goes into the placement of a castle, along with asking strategic questions including... Where is the nearest water source? Is there a quarry near the castle? Is it good land for farming? Is the position vulnerable to attack? Would my enemies reach it easily? Is there a better place to build where there are more natural resources? I came to the conclusion that this is indeed the best place to build my castle. The nearest water source is a river that runs along the castle boundaries. The river is a good source of irrigation for farms and plants. There is a quarry about a half mile away from the building site. It will provide stone and help complete the building of the castle, with the wall for protection ... Pic...
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