Mesopotamia Stories, Part 3


The Battles of Akkad

By Sean

Sargon's army was prepared.

Pushu-Ken, a commanding officer, took part of the army and tried to push forward, but they all were shot down by their adversaries. Some of them tried to crawl away, but they were cut down from their opponents.

Esagil, Unzi, Dada, and Beletum formed a mini-push and managed to kill the first part of the army. But that's when it started to go downhill.

As they made it to the second chunk of the army, they left everyone else uncovered. Before anyone could react, Sargon's archers shot a huge portion of the army down. Most of them fell into canals and drifted away.

The few remaining army men knew it was futile. But they still took out as many of Sargon's men as they could.

They were like a tornado, sweeping away everything and everyone that was in their path.


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